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Rockin Ronnie
17th October 2006, 11:30 PM
Any suggestions you might have to improve things a little would be appreciated.

This is the original shot but I tried "curves" in PSPX and it improved the contrast somewhat. Tried B&W, red filter seemed to be the most interesting effect. Sepia also looked interesting.

Ron

E-1, f4.9, 35mm, 1/20, iso100, pattern metering

Deillub
17th October 2006, 11:40 PM
Great picture... but I find it has to many points of interest.
I find the tree and wall to the left distract from the line of trees on the right.
You may want to crop it to focus attention on the row of trees only

Rockin Ronnie
18th October 2006, 12:01 AM
I tweaked the contrast a bit as well.

Ron

JBMUK
18th October 2006, 12:19 AM
I think the cropped version is a lot better

Deillub
18th October 2006, 03:31 PM
YES - that works.
It only introduces one subjet for the eye to behold.

David Worthington
18th October 2006, 03:46 PM
Good shot and nice recession in the image............ hope you dont mind if i have a try ?

StuG
18th October 2006, 03:48 PM
I like the extra contrast with Dave's crop the best.

just out of interest, what are they?

Rockin Ronnie
18th October 2006, 09:02 PM
Dave's crop has gotten rid of that object on the left side and balances the subject better. Thanks and I like the deeper contrast, more "moody"

Ron

David Worthington
19th October 2006, 09:20 AM
Glad you approved........... cropped it and straightened the horizon a touch..... auto levels sorted the colours and then darkened it a touch........ vignetted in 2 stages to darken the outer sections ..... cloned out the white bench and something else lurkin on the right hand side......... nothing much really.......... it was a good pic to start with:wave4:

BarryM
19th October 2006, 09:56 AM
Here is my pitiful attempt. Done in psp using the age old script slightly adapted