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Full Critique Act 2. Arriving of Godot.

Discussion in 'Mono Images Forum' started by PavL, Oct 11, 2017.

  1. PavL

    PavL Member

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    Thank you for your thoughts.
    Cheers. agmf_forum.jpg
     
  2. Ramble Vision

    Ramble Vision Mountain Climber Super Moderator

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    honestly, im not sure about this one. there dosn't appear (to me) to be a main subject . the light window draws the eye there, so distracts a little. I think refining the scene down to something more concise, having better lighting and more tones in the conversion would improve it. ( by better lighting I mean that it should be lighting up the scene not falling randomly on it)
     
  3. john.margetts.ph

    john.margetts.ph Well-Known Member

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    I would have thought that the empty chairs are the subject as the people who were sitting in them while waiting for Godot are no longer waiting and have, presumably, gone down the pub with Godot.

    I rather like the conceit.
     
  4. Minor Problem

    Minor Problem Always on Premium Member

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    Not sure about this at all. The main subject appears to be a tin can.
     
  5. Kevin Fox

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    Godot is a play, I know, there most be some meaning in this shot. But it's a big miss for me. The shot makes no sense at all.
     
  6. PavL

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    Thank you Ramble.

    Thank you John.

    Thank you MP

    Thank you Kevin.

    I see two focuses on this pic. One is the light in the glass door/window that may represent Godot. The second focus is the abandoned chairs by disillusioned people. Unfortunately, I could not control details of this scene.
    Cheers.
     

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