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Full Critique Another Portrait from Yesterday

Discussion in 'Portrait Images Forum' started by Minor Problem, Jan 29, 2019.

  1. Minor Problem

    Minor Problem Always on Premium Member

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    I couldn't resist this one, I just adore it.

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    I can see why, She really is very pretty and her hair is amazing and works with her bra choice of course...:D
     
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    That's the best one for me Barry. Very nicely done.
     
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    Very impressive
     
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    Very Nice.
     
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  6. Christopher

    Christopher Here a lot

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    Superb Barry! Stunning colours.
     
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    Snips Always on

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    Beautiful
     
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  8. Roger S

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    Much better than the other, Barry. Here eyes are beautiful, and the copper shines through in virtually everything.
     
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    Superb Barry she is a great model. This shot has a sense of sensuality about it, well done.
     
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    We've worked together briefly before but spent a good chunk of time before shooting catching up and building a better rapport which with hindsight really helped the shoot go so well.
     
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    How's her knees Barry? :)
    This is a belter, super model , pose and light and +1 on the coordinated bra and hair ! . Super work
     
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    Very nice Barry - that's truly stunning. :first:
     
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  13. Minor Problem

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    Thanks Trevor, I think this may be my favourite image from a day full of images I'm pretty chuffed with. It has to be said that I did the easy bit though, without a great subject it would be a snap.
     
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    great one Barry. Really like this one. good look and looks, like the light, her colour co-ordinatuions is great, lovely eyes, and a bit of bare shoulder on top :)
     
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    This is easily my favourite of the set Barry.
     
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    Cheers Steve, this one really leapt out at me when I went through them.

    Thanks Dave, it's my joint favourite with the chair one but either way I love this one.
     
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    Great Image and love the colors and how she is capturing the moment with you.
     
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    Cracking shot Barry and especially so being colour blind, the colour's are very complementary and add to the overall image , mind you had some great material to work with, a very pretty young lady, well done sir.
     
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    Really nice shot and lighting, just a few things really stand out for me,
    her face/skin is super matt and looks like you just put it portrait pro without masking ( that could be down to the low res image you have to upload to this site )
    a lot of distracting hair including the one coming off her bra and on to her skin
    and her elbow just looks strange sticking out.
    Its a super good shot and I'm just saying what id change if I was editing it.
     
  20. Minor Problem

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    The loss of detail is due to the heavy use of a gaussuan blurred layer over the top in an ortonesque sort of fashion but I'll have a look at a less heavy edit and take care of the hairs and see which I prefer. Thanks for the cc!
     
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  21. Ramble Vision

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    nice one barry. great pose/framing good colours to.
     
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    Newbandit Always on

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    Lovely warm colours that complement each other very well.
     
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    That is one super portrait Barry. It has all the elements that we all strive for in trying to get "the one". Nailed it!
     
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