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Full Critique Jenny popped in...

Discussion in 'Studio Images Forum' started by FlashBangWallop, Aug 12, 2015.

  1. FlashBangWallop

    FlashBangWallop Always on

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    Jenny called in on Monday
    Did a few bits and pieces....first model Ive paid for a while...she had a casting and mentioned in it she had two weeks spare before going back to Uni so...in like Flynn

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  2. FlashBangWallop

    FlashBangWallop Always on

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    oh....treated the studio to some new seating as well....Im always flush in August...no expense spared
     
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    Tenorplayer Always on Premium Member

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    Two more of your wonderful images FB, beautiful ,sultry girl. Superb lighting in #1 and really love the `Victorian` PP in the second.
     
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    Love both of these Doug but I wonder if the face softening could do with dialling down a little in the 1st? My what big pupils she has in that, did you have the modelling lights off?
     
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    I really like the first Doug. Very softened skin but I think it works. Great eyes!
     
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  6. tenchy

    tenchy Rain maker Administrator

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    Can't really comment on the skin mobile, but I love the mood and toning of the first.
    I wonder if the bridge of nose is a tad light compared to rest of face?

    Like the posh seating.
     
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  7. chaz

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    Loving no1, no2 is nice but her left leg looks a bit strange in that pose,from a distance it looks like she has no foot, it could be the shadow is hiding the definition.
     
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    Brilliant these. Only thing I'm not overly keen on is the dramatic change of texture in the flooring to the left. All in all tho, great job. Money well spent
     
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  9. Manny Canseco

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    Quite the looker I'd say, #1 is brillant and my pick of the two.
     
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  10. FlashBangWallop

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    Thanks all. All comments noted and agreed.
     
  11. D.Sant

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    Excellent job!!
     
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    Really nice, two is my favorite :)
     
  13. Jk777

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    Superb, especially the second one. Great model too. Well worth the payment.
     
  14. John Bruce

    John Bruce Well-Known Member

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    Like them both, love the first. Her hair is lovely. It looks almost painted.
     
  15. Mike Hirst

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    She makes a very photogenic model, nice catch
     
  16. slipper

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    #1 is stunning, the skin colour is superb (how was that done?).
     
  17. David RJ Brown

    David RJ Brown Old Hand

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    2 for me. More texture in the skin would be more to my taste in the first, though the mood and colour are very effective.
     
  18. GFM

    GFM Always on

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    Lovely shots -- Skin is a bit yellow-ish on the first shot but I do not mind too much.

    GF
     
  19. RebelPhoto

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    Excellent work #1 is the pick for me, beautiful model
     
  20. Ramble Vision

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    The OP hasn't been on the forum form well over a year. Comment by all means but note they probably won't be seen by the author of the image
     

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